|Reviews for Fatesbane: The Falucite Bride|
| nagi chapter 16 . 3/5/2016
How am I suposed to get the password I dont see any in the notes below nor on the coments page and I dont have an acount ! I want to read the whole version !
| Sorceress Myst chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
I hate to leave a review on my own story, but in the case of more 'guest' reviews like Meh where I can't answer their questions, I'll leave this:
Yes, the main character is intentionally a hypocrite. She starts off as a bratty child despite her age and will grow up and change as the story progresses. And her interactions with others with change as well as she gains new experiences that makes her grow as a character. No, I don't have to give a clear definition of falucite right off the bat. If I did that, then the first chapter would be one long, boring, informative piece. You find out more as you read more chapters.
This is a story of a delinquent child who is given a second chance with a non-human father figure. I don't expect anyone to like her at first, and there is no guarantee you'll like her by the end of the first book. But I can guarantee that there is a huge difference between 'Dantia' of Book 1 and 'Tia' of Book 3 - same person, but totally different personality and outlook.
So yeah, don't worry. I'm aware of what I'm doing. And thank you, Meh, on your opinion of Dantia. Your thoughts on her are totally fair.
| Meh chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
No offense but it would be nice if you could give a clear definition of what is a falucite and I'm not overly fond of the main character as she is extremely judgemental and short temper around humans but much more tolerant around falucite. She often complains about the 'arrogance' of humans but acts just as arrogant if not worse. Unless it was your intention to make a hypocrite...
| The Golden Orchid chapter 28 . 3/18/2015
Your story was SO beautiful...
I just spent all day reading it, unable to leave it halfway because it was incredible. The plotline was so well thought out and impeccably written that it's hard to find any flaws in it. And your wordpress website is amazing too. You really are a perfectionist, aren't you? This story had just the right amount of angst in it, interlaced with the humor and explicit scenes (which made my ovaries explode a bit, haha)
Not many writers have it in them to evoke so much emotion in their readers. You're obviously one of them :)
I hope this book is on the shelves someday as it deserves to be!
On to the next book!
| Anon chapter 28 . 12/18/2014
Just wanted to say that this is a wonderful story.
| hannaxD chapter 28 . 12/5/2014
I'm in love with the world you've created and the story you've spun, your characters are lovely as well!
I can't wait to read the sequels!
Having a blast,
| PaintedPicture chapter 28 . 9/1/2013
Omg... I have no words.. Which, for a fellow writer is a strange experience. Reading the story I find myself having much to say, many opinions. I loved this story.. And now that I'm slowly wrapping my head around the whole story I'm outraged that doesn't have more reviews and favorites. Your sentence structures and character development was great. I did not have one moment when I wanted to skip ahead and just find out what happened in the end, I wanted to grow and walk with Tia. It wasn't predictable, not in common ways. One of the best parts was that it wasn't an instant I love you, you love me thing. It was realistic in terms of the way you progress in a relationship. I'm just a little annoyed that it hasn't got more reviews. It was amazing and I hope that you keep up the amazing work because I just... You're a great writer, with good grammar. Keep it up lovely!
| B chapter 28 . 7/31/2013
The part of him chasing her down the alleys to capture her was definately as strong factor for this story. It is interesting how you portray her feelings, and that she hardly knows what she is feeling. This is so true for us females. There are many days that I don't know what I feel! A Very nice start.
| TheMobBunny chapter 9 . 6/4/2013
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| stuck in bed chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Hi! Your story has been added to the Fantasy/Supernatural category on A Drop of Romeo! :)
Here's your review:
The first few chapters of this story were slightly slow and full of details, which made me rather hesitant on whether to review the story or not. However, once the introductions were put aside, I could hardly stop myself from reading the whole story. I soon got invested in the main relationship and the mystery surrounding the main character, Dantia (which isn't cleared up in this story, but in its sequel).
I think what really impressed me the most was how Sorceress Myst created such a detailed world. The Falucites and their mannerisms were described incredibly well, that it felt as though Sorceress Myst knew them inside out! Moreover, she even crafted a map of Orja, which, besides being useful, also proved to me even further how well she knew what was going on. Creating a new world is such a difficult task, but it seemed so effortless, because it was done so well.
The sexual themes which Sorceress Myst mentions in her summary are definitely there. However, most of them have been cut, so that even if the story's rated M, it's nothing scandalous. The uncut scenes have been posted on her website, in case anyone wants to read them. They're not overdone and written as well as the rest of her story.
Needless to say, this is one story that I'm going to enjoy reading over and over again - each time finding something new and wonderful to admire.
| Luna Magic17 chapter 28 . 3/31/2013
I believe I have found another wonderful novel :)