Reviews for Trick or Treat
Mercyette chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
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Again, you offer a chilling tale - that's what I love about these stories! I wonder if these stories were inspired by anything in specific. If you could flesh the stories out some, I could definitely see these stories getting published in a compiliation of some sort. Good job.

My only complaint is that you might want to go through and do revision for the actions of some of the characters. Eugene seemed pretty irriesponsible for letting his little brother wonder off. If his parents put him in charge, I though he would be a little more concerned that his brother was missing. Secondly, you place the "sniff" Richie has in the quotations toward the end of the story. It makes your great story look unprofessional. Try putting "he sniffed" outside of the quotations and show the reader how terrified he really is.
Blackrose99 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Aw kinda sad... good story...
Melissa chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Very good story! nice ending Happy Halloween even though its over where I live