Reviews for I Don't Love You and Other Lies
panultimate chapter 17 . 1/15/2013
This was great!
hat in a box chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Just read the first chapter of this and, unlike with the vast majority of stories on this site, I will definitely be carrying on. You have a great writing style and I'm really keen to see where this story is going to go. (I'm already keeping my fingers crossed for Jamie and Gabe to get together!) Awesome job so far!
The Quote Bandit chapter 17 . 1/8/2012
*sniff* Ending made me go d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

And also made me very happy. Gotta love a good ole love story that gets resolved with zombie killing. :D
periodpain chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Awesome, awesome story.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Loved the way the last chapter ended it. Thought it was so smart.

Very good story.
Z chapter 17 . 1/2/2012
Too often on this site, I become so bored by the mediocre writing that after a few chapters of the story, I click right to the last chapter to see how things end before continuing on my hunt for a better, more interesting story.

But not with yours. Your story swept me up from beginning to end with romance, suspense, and just a little (okay, a lot) lying. I love how relate-able Jamie is, I love how super-stealthy with awesome lie detecting skills Gabe is, I love how, just for a second I totally bought that "Rachel" was Dawson's daughter.

In short, I congratulate you on a well-thought out, interesting story that I will probably read again and again.
Yalina chapter 17 . 1/2/2012

Keroppi chapter 3 . 1/2/2012
It's well written, it is. Really amazing... Lol, thinking of becoming a writer?
The Quote Bandit chapter 12 . 12/15/2011
Coolio, just finished this, so, my thoughts:

It was really enjoyable, starting out with a bit of a good ole romance novel, and then now we're hinting at some serial killer action here, which is intense. Love the characters. :)

My only criticisms would be that the amount of harping on Jamie's liar-ness outweighs the actual onscreen, well, lying. At least at the beginning; after some point it evened out to a good combination. Perhaps show more proof of it, stuff like the chapter-long anecdote about Ben and the not-real pony would help with that, to help balance things out

And the other, not really a criticism, but when you called Gabe a wizard, I legitimately thought he was a wizard, with magic and all that. I'm assuming that some term of some sort, but it was a bit unclear to me.

But yeah, these are just some thoughts for if you're planning on going over it and second drafting it, which I think would be well worth stuff, since I really did enjoy reading this. Hope you finish it. :)
LikeABawss chapter 11 . 12/11/2011
Yay an update so soon! I'm already excited for the next :(
LikeABawss chapter 10 . 12/11/2011
I love the story! I hope gabe and jamie get together!
TheMoltenWindow chapter 7 . 11/18/2011
To anyone thinking of reading this, Do! But be warned, you will end up reading it all.
TheMoltenWindow chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
REALLY good. Will read on.
Chola13 chapter 5 . 11/9/2011
I really like this xx i dont mean to ruin the story or something but is he falling for her and vice versa xx wow this is really cute xxx love it xx please update xxx