Reviews for Prolonged Destiny
RoShAn chapter 3 . 2/24/2012
It is a nice story... wonderfully set. There are minor errors in terms of grammar... hopefully you will look up on it. I think that is all. Feel free to read and review my stories too
RoShAn chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I love the prolouge but there are a few typos... hope you could look up and correct them