Reviews for Camp element
Willie Jackson chapter 5 . 11/11/2013
Not a bad story you have going here. It'll be interesting to see how these kids handle the camp and develop their abilities. Make sure you improve your details though as you develop the battle scenes - things seem a bit random if you ask me but that's my opinion and smooth out your transitions as it helps make the story flow a bit better. Otherwise, I like what you have going here. Can't wait for your next chapter!
PurpleRose328 chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
This is a good chapter Sa! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
PurpleRose328 chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
COOL! I love this chapter! XD And Jesse is the tallest? What's her height? The plot is great! I can't wait for more! Update soon! :D
emmyds chapter 2 . 12/9/2011
While listing the quarters of the camp, you seem to have left out Air . . . Was this intentional, or just an accident? I really like this so far, and the story hasn't even started yet!
PurpleRose328 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Name- Charissa Will Hanson

Nickname(s)- Char

Age (9-18)- 14

Element parent- Anika

Normal (doesn't do any elemental magic, not a elementalist) parent- William Leon Hanson (actually, Will is involved into another magical dimension. So, I don't consider him as normal)

Family- William "Will" Leon Hanson-Father. Only child.

Scar- On her cheeks and forheads because of a few pimples. Also some on her legs for being clumsy.

Tattoo- None. Hates it.

Birthmark- None.

Nationality- Filipino

Make up- Light on special occasions only.

Jewelry- Purple watch

Eye Color- Dark Brown

Hair Color- Ultra Black (As black as the oceans at night)

Skin Color- Light Brown

Body Shape- Quite chubby

Height- 5'4

Personality- Very determined. Kind. Compassionate. Unpredictable. Wise. Very childish, irritable and sensitive. Mercurial. Sometimes, overreacting. Talkative when it comes to the things she loves but very quiet when it comes to strange topics or if she meet a stranger.

Fatal Flaw- Her will and determination. Also her loyalty to her friends.

History/ Story of Life-

Powers from their elemental parent- She could control water. Breathe underwater. Make huge tidal waves and tsunamis. Anything that's basically related to water like sourcing a place with water. Could command any water animals. Can make someone dehydrated. Secretly, she knows how to control blood too, though she NEVER use it, in fear that's it's a curse which is not. It'll be a curse if she'll use it the wrong way. And many others.

Favorite Singers(optional)- Selena Gomez and Taylor Swift. Also Avril Lavigne (I Love You, Complicated, Why, Girlfriend, Skater Boy etc.), Stephen Speaks (Passenger Seat and Out of my League -soon to be a songfic-).

Favorite Band(optional)- Cascada, Lady Antebellum.

Favorite Songs(optional)- Too many to mention. She loves songs with great tune and lyrics.

Things they do in their spare time- Read books while listening to her purple headphones, draw, write stories, play with the waters, etc.

Hobbies(optional)- Check out Things they do in their spare time

Favorite Books(optional)- Percy Jackson and the Olympians, Harry Potter, Kane Chronicles, Nancy Drew, Hunger Games Trilogy, Magic Tree House Series, 39 Clues etc.

Pet(s)(optional)- A chocolate brown Labrador puppy with the name of 'Brownie'.

Favorite Quotes(optional)- Too many to mention. But she loves and follows the quote "Love God above all things" and "If there's a will, there's a way."

Motto(optional)- Love God above all things and If there's a will, there's a way

Clothing- Simple but comfortable

Elemental weapon (Staff of water, arrows of earth, sword of the moon, light of the sun shriukens, wand of fire, bayonet of death, axe of lightning, ETC): A 3 1/2 sword with a purple hilt with the name of "Waveslash". Its name is engraved on the sword. Oh and her sword could turn into an English oak wand! XD And oh, by using either her sword or wand, she could control the waves.

OC#2:

Name- Bill Leon Zayle Anderson

Nickname(s)- Bill

Age (9-18)- 14

Element parent- Timothy

Normal (doesn't do any elemental magic, not a elementalist) parent- Charil Zayle Anderson

Family- Leon Anderson- step dad, Charil Zayle Anderson- mom, Julius Bill Anderson- young half-bro

Scar- None

Tattoo- None

Birthmark- None

Nationality- Filipino

Make up- None

Jewelry- a blue baller

Eye Color- Brown

Hair Color- Black (But Charissa's darker)

Skin Color- Light Brown

Body Shape- Fit and Athletic

Height- 5'4 1/2

Personality- Annoying. Cool. Funny. Joker. Carefree. Happy-go-lucky and yet responsible. Smart. Loves to prank. Fun to be with. Will never fail to make you laugh/smile (except for Charissa.). Optimistic.

Fatal Flaw- Loyalty

History/ Story of Life-

Powers from their elemental parent- He could control the wind. Fly. Control flying animals. If mad, he'll take the breath away from you, in short, you can't breathe. Can do anything with wind/air.

Favorite Singers(optional)- Too many to mention

Favorite Band(optional)- Cascada

Favorite Songs(optional)- Too many to mention

Things they do in their spare time- Pranking. Hanging out with friends. Making people laugh. Play with the wind. Etc.

Hobbies(optional)-Check out Things they do in their spare time.

Favorite Books(optional)- Percy Jackson and the Olympians, Harry Potter, Kane Chronicles, 39 Clues, Hunger Games Trilogy, Chronicles of Narnia etc.

Pet(s)(optional)- A blue bird named "Bluie". The blue bird is similar to Twitter.

Favorite Quotes(optional)- "Never give up"

Motto(optional)- Never give up

Clothing- Simple but comfortable

Elemental weapon (Staff of water, arrows of earth, sword of the moon, light of the sun shriukens, wand of fire, bayonet of death, axe of lightning, ETC): A 3 1/2 sword with blue hilt with the name of "Skyripper". It can turn into the wand of air too. And, he can use it for transportation.

P.S: The history will be in PM!