Reviews for The Path
Max Hadeln chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I took into account the fact that you had written this poem in fifteen minutes.

I noticed a few spelling errors on the way, and this one isn't nearly as fluent as your newer works, but that's OK. I still enjoyed this very much, especially your descriptions such as "the trees had been wrapped in golden and red leaves." stuff like that really made the scene clear as day in my head, and I really liked that.

Again, keep up the great work.
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
This makes me think and etc...