Reviews for Charity
Nalui chapter 1 . 2/28
Didn't know what to expect... got what I expected XD

Yep another fave from me sheesh I do love to fave yaoi WAY too much... do I care? Nope sir :D

- Lui
Reulle chapter 1 . 2/3
That start had me literally in tears, of laughter, it was impressive how you started with such an easy pace that kept the plot and added humour into it. I don't think there was much character development but overall it was an interesting read.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Damn, that was really hot. Haha.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
you are good at this
BarricadeBunnies chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Wow. So HOT!
That was amazing! Well done!
Stupendous and fantastic!
You have a serious gift for writing gay smut!
Keep it up please! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Hotter. At first was like what two people have normal conversations when they about to duck . Good job loved I
Arethusa Cyberia chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Kinky. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
oooooooh YUUUM! ;)
Danny chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
I loved it, very hot. However, I could do with less "everyone has a redemptive factor". And it's always hot to have the names in there, though I get why they were left out.
morningstorm70 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
That was hot (sizzle sounds)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
ugh. ThatChickMelanie. thats me(the guest) stupid mobile-_-
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
that was me, just btw(: vvv
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
LOVED IT! this has satisfied my (extremely) perverted side and now i may sleep peacfully thank you
RedBloodonWhiteRoses chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Please tell me you are going to write more!
Gimme Back My Pigeon chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
Haha - this was freaking awesome! I loved it!