Reviews for Day Dreamer
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
"The empty symbols on the board make now sense, not when there is a thought lurking nearby." Reminds me so much of the days when I used to sleep during maths classes. I was sitting in front of the teacher's desk, and the teacher didn't even notice I was asleep. XD

Anyway, to your poem: great description of the small distractions called daydreams, really good work. Especially love those lines: "A flame which licks your senses like an unknown drug."

"play a game of make-believe"

"as the days grow colder and attentions waver on the thoughts of something serious"

(Uh yes, it's waver, not wafer like the sweet. But that's really the only complaint I have.)

Love this poem! So utterly relatable :) Brilliant work _
DougieM chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Brilliant love it )
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Brilliant as always! I would try to review without repeating myself but all you stuff is so BRILLIANT!

Great job again!
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
I hate paying attention in class (: loved ur poemz :D