Reviews for The Life of Subject 245
Ric Pike chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
An interesting start on the abduction story, but I feel that the pacing is too quick. Too few descriptions leaves much of the work to be done by the reader. Plot-wise, you have a great thing going, but developing your writing style should be a priority.

Keep writing!
Whiitewolf chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Ooh. This looks interesting. I hope you continue. :)