|Reviews for Enchanted|
| Fawkes chapter 14 . 12/9/2012
I. Tricking. Love. This. Story! You cannot end it! I do actually have an idea. You could put in something about Alexa realizing her mistake of friend dumping Maddie, and make up, or you could have something totally humiliating happen to Alexa, like the cheerleaders friend dumping her, and have her then realize that Maddie is her best friend ever, yada yada. Or you could disregard this entirely. But I highly suggest you take it into consideration. Also,I love Dream On. Please don't give up on either story. They both have so much potential.
| Fawkes chapter 4 . 12/7/2012
Awesome story! No offense, but you might want to use spellcheck if you have it.
| Shadowkiller176 chapter 14 . 8/29/2012
please please finish this story!
| MsWhtevr chapter 14 . 8/16/2012
Hey , wt happnd to Thid Story? It startd of well... N I'm in suspense , kill it won't u? Pretty Please
| 3NoOrdinaryUnicorn3 chapter 13 . 7/30/2012
I haven't been reading in a while, but please update as soon as possible! :)
Also what your friend said is completely untrue! I'm pretty sure it is not stealing to write about people you know and I actually really like it being so predictable. Well. It was predictable, haha. Not so much now, what with brown eyed-jock and stuff, but still.
So yeah I really like your story and hope you continue!
| jaded dragon1070 chapter 12 . 7/14/2012
Ooohh...i base my characters off of people i know too! i'm not as crazy as i thought i was! HURRAY! Anywho...i thought it would be cool if maddie and nat got into something together...i dont know, like plotting against alexa or something...i know, its really dumb but i think its cool when enemies get highjacked by people...mwahahaha!
| jaded dragon1070 chapter 13 . 7/14/2012
Please continue for the sake of my sanity. But hey, im already half insane. the side effects of writing for me are weird. I get ideas and if i dont write them down i trail off and stuff but if i try NOT to write it gets worse. I believe you are a genius and i can tell that i have found a fellow Harry Potter nerd. If you havent already...check out .com it's the best!
P.S. (my name is Kayla) Just in case... :P
| jaded dragon1070 chapter 8 . 7/14/2012
HAHA! Masquerade ball! I love the cruel irony of it!
| Melodious harmony chapter 13 . 6/10/2012
Haha you didn't have to slap yourself :D but like I said, I'm glad you didn't give up!
| Shadowkiller176 chapter 13 . 6/10/2012
i love your story! you have to finish it, okay? Good. I am not taking no for an answer.
| Melodious harmony chapter 12 . 3/21/2012
Oh so it's MY fault, now? Geez! You're nice! Haha just kidding I haven't given you any ideas because mine are REALLY bad... But if you want them, i could hand them over... I suppose. But only if you're SURE you want them.
| Melodious harmony chapter 11 . 3/17/2012
You should definately continue! Sure, I'll agree that this story doesnt have a clear plot, but life isnt a path people can casually walk down. It has twists and turns and at most times, is just a prairie with no direction. I think that it not having a clear plot makes it a little more life-like, if you know what I mean. Besides, when you started writing this, you seemed to have a lot of enthusiasm and were excited about it. Otherwise, you wasted your time writing something you didnt care about. You wrote 10 chapters already, so dont give up just because your friends arent being supportive (for the record, using people you know for inspiration isn't cheating). Trust me, I know it sucks when people say they don't like something you write/draw/create. It's only like that because you care too deeply about what others think. If you're writing for others, and not because you want to, don't waste your time and write something you would enjoy and be proud of and ignore the people who are being debby-downers. It gets hard at times, but if you remember your reasons, it becomes a lot easier. Wow... That was a really long lecture... I'll stop now and say, if you like what you're writing, then continue, and if you don't, then don't. Since you seem to want my input, i would say you should continue because you seemed excited to be writing this when you first began and people don't usually become like that when they aren't doing something they want to do. But in the end, it's entirely up to you. :)
| sleepyloner chapter 11 . 3/17/2012
I love this story, I do agreed that the plot was rather predictable and cliche and corny but whatever, who cares. I love them. I think you should continue this story. Why waste all the efforts of writing 10 chapters right? Plus, I really am curious is Will the guy from the party? And all this while I thought Will was the guy but when part about the note, now I am completely baffled. Heh. Oh one more thing I want to know about Charlie and Nat! You should write a scene on both of them as well! You really should continue. :) In the meanwhile I'll try to think of an ideas to share with you!
-curiouslili xx :)
ps: Writer blocks sucks, I know.
| Melodious harmony chapter 10 . 2/16/2012
*pouts* now I'm confused! Isn't will the one who was at the dance? Wouldn't it make him happy if his note made her blush like that? Or maybe a friend put it there... Then perhaps not... :/ hmm...
Haha it's ok. Take your time. We all have lives outside of writing so no need to apologize. But don't give up on this story and abandon it! I am begging you! Please continue!
| xSinfulAngelx chapter 10 . 2/16/2012
I love this story. It is lovely. Good job. Please continue, it would make me very happy. This is definitely going on my favorites list. :)