|Reviews for On My Own|
| TheKZDC chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
This was really a really good story chapter, although I did have to read some parts twice because it was a bit confusing. Just a bit, mind you. Details are nice, and your jabs at humor are okay. The romantic, really fluffy part was especially good. I hope you are serious about finishing this. I want to read more.
Here's hoping you make 50,000 words. (I don't mean to be mean but 1667 x 5 is 8335. Sorry!)