What a fun story. It was very entertaining.

Good story :) I would love to see Garrett get his own story though, sounds like he would be pretty entertaining.

Loooll thanks awesome

Aw. Very cute.

Good, as always :)

You really know how to create an atmosphere and how to show a character's personality through only a few dialogues and descriptions. As usual, interactions between the protagonists are quick but effective, and the pace just right. A good read

EEEEEEE THATS SO SWEET! teghan and liam remind me of watanuki and domeiki from xxxHolic if u know wat that is. loved the story!

I can't help it-I have to say it: affect, not effect. The whole alternate magic-based science reality was great! In a few short sentences you had me completely believing in your world! As always, great story!

I really liked this one. It seemed different from what you normally do. I am a fan of magic and science fiction, myself, so seeing you branch in that direction a bit is neat. I wholeheartedly approve. Out of curiosity, are you participating in NaNoWriMo?

OMG this story is so cute! i love Liam!

"Don't make me say it,"

"Okay."

"So?"

"Maybe you could use hand signals," ha ha ha

how old is Liam, btw?

Very nicely written. Good storyline with some funny moments thrown in there.

I really wish I knew somebody like Liam. For...who names a hydra Skittles? XD

~Con