|Reviews for Listed
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/2/2016
Please update. I love this story and I miss your writting
| It's 2016 - last chapter 15 . 2/28/2016
Update was 2012.:: I have absolute confidence that this is a goner. And it I'm wrong-Thank you thank you thank you...for continuing after a 4 year hiatus.
Or-it's a goner and I'm left with my imagination...where he ends up hooking up w Sam, Landon or a possible new character that came up in Chapter 18. IDK-I'm reaching for the stars at the moment.
Either way- Your story was great, hot, cute and heart tugging. I like it! Thanks for sharing it with us! You Are Awesome! Hope you're well and life not being a complete Donkey to you.
Much Thanks and admiration
A fellow Slash Reader :)
| Anonymous chapter 14 . 1/16/2016
| Chaos-Mode chapter 15 . 9/14/2014
So I read ur friday nights story and I thought to occupy myself between your updates ill read ur other stories...and im glad that I did. This is amazing. Hot. Sexy. God...I love landon...sexy little beast he is.
| dustygrey chapter 15 . 3/6/2014
i was directed to this story by the_slash_pile community on livejournal. normally, i try to avoid wip, especially those that are older than a few months, but honestly, i'm glad i read what's up of this. you've done a good job with showing hayden's personal conflicts and i've enjoyed the closeness he's developed with landon. i understand how difficult it can be to get back into a story's mindset, but i do hope that you come back to this one. :)
not to plug it or anything, but camp nanowrimo is coming up in april (and july), maybe consider continuing this, if you're up for it? i figured a positive review and an attempt at encouragement couldn't be a bad thing. _
if you're interested, i'm 'yakineko oni' on nanowrimo, and always willing to hand out words of encouragement as requested! i'll stop before this gets weirder. take care.
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/8/2013
I really hope he ends up with Sam or Landon
| rainbownostalgia chapter 15 . 12/1/2013
Hello, I'm a little addicted to you.
Hello, I'm REALLY addicted to you.
Gosh, I'm usually more of a FanFiction person but whenever I go to FictionPress, I seldom stay long. Except I've been like stuck here for the past few days ever since I discovered your stories. Like wow, I think I started with Friday Nights after searching up slash/incest because, you know, who doesn't like that. I actually planned to shelf it and read it later (BECAUSE IT WASN'T COMPLETE, and it looks like you haven't updated in a while ;( ) but my stupid phone wasn't able to sign in using FanFiction so I couldn't follow the story...but I didn't want to drop it.
And darn it, why didn't I listen to my phone.
I've been reading your stories (at night, of course) until like 5AM for the past two days which is REALLY REALLY bad, but hey, it's Thanksgiving Break. Plus it's not too bad because I read in bed and all. I will let it be known that usually when I get on FictionPress, I get disappointed and leave, but I think I'm hooked on you :). It's very sad because the updates don't seem to be happening regularly, but hey, people have lives. And plus, I still have a few more stories of yours to go through...who knows what will happen when I've finished those TT.
I don't know why, it feels like I've found my favorite authors here on FictionPress...you and two other people. EXCEPT Y'ALL DON'T UPDATE REGULARLY (whyyy oh why...). I wish I could turn into your boyfriend or something so that we could share mutual interest over your writing, but sadly I'm female and don't swing that way (not a problem with it though).
Anyway, about the story- I thought I was going to like Friday Nights the most (especially after the first few chapters of this) but I don't why! I think I like this story the most. It has a nice vibe, plus it's sooooo unique. Like you don't see anyone wanting to be a porn star reluctantly unless they're like blackmailed into it or whatever in today's stories. Plus, Hayden is such a sweetie and cutie and Landon is so adorable and cool and Stephen is no and Sam is a great guy and Trevor is...Trevor. Anyway, yeah. I love it. Please keep going. Of course, I know you will because you said so and everything but you know, maybe you need a few reminders every once in awhile in the form of your readers.
Sorry if this review is long. I just ranted everything I wanted to say, and hopefully because it IS long, you'll see it! Yay. Okay, gotta get back to life now. LOVE YOU!
| blackkitties chapter 14 . 4/22/2013
I hope you update this sometime. I really miss reading this.
| Wings of Beauty chapter 15 . 4/20/2013
Absolutely loving this! I've got to say I'm not a big fan of Stephen. He's not good enough for Hayden! Landon is way better. I hope they end up together! :) please update your fantastic story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
So, I keep coming back to this site for the sole purpose of checking on this story...so please...update it. :)
| C3PO chapter 15 . 10/8/2012
I just spent the better part of an hour reading this story and sometime soon I'll log in from my account to give you proper chapter reviews; but i just had to say a quick few things before heading to work. First: I am really, really pro Landon&Hayden. Really. Something about him giving up his virginity, to someone he obviously has a strong affinity to, just to protect Hayden and him being Hayden's first and only real time, just speaks volumes on how not friend-like their relationship actually is, however much both of them may dismiss it. However, you're the author and i don't want to make assumptions, but those were just my personal feelings. I guess you'd have to wait for the story to develope more, though i still think Sam is more of a friend than Landon.
And second: This part makes me cringe(every time!), but you're going to make him have sex with other people, aren't you? Like a bajillion other people? You are right? Holy. Of course, you are; there's still the list and the contract. I feel nauseous. I'm surprised none of the reviewers cared about that. Hayden's just so innocent and vulnerable, it just makes you're protective instincts kick in; he really did get into something way over his head. And once something's on the Internet, it's there forever. I can't imagine that he won't regret it later on in life even a little. Or it won't ruin future relationships, personal or professional, otherwise.
Also i think that was the perfect time for Stephen to say goodbye, although it would be a good plot device for him to come back later on in the story when things are slightly different for Landon and his feelings for Hayden. Like, if that was what he was like jealous when he DIDN'T actually care about Hayden, i just wonder what he would be like later on. Although, it would be awesome if Landon was the one to fall first, since he's so blasé about sex and relationships; and just come on, its time Hayden stopped being the emotional punching bag for angst in the story. It's like bad things just happen to him one after the other, with no silver lining. And I'm totally not being a critic right now, i just really am responding to how his life's taken a downward spiral after Trevor's death. I guess i just really want to see Landon trying to get Hayden to like him, without him flirting or instrumenting sex as a precursor to a relationship.
You haven't updated in almost a year but I'll be hopeful that you haven't completely abandoned this story just when it was getting interesting. Oh and in response to a previous review, i wouldn't say this was better or inferior to Friday Nights; if anything i loved both for such completely different reasons that it's hard to even compare the two to each other. I do agree with the person who said that you've grown as a writer with every passing chapter and found your 'rhythm' as a writer, so to speak. Oh and i have to say this before i forget: but a lot of the time authors feel like their works been discredited because certain readers only care for the sex or smut, even when it doesn't fit in with the character development or story, but i haven't cared a dime for any of that in this story. You've actually managed to hold our attention wonderfully with you're story that anything other then the characters is just background stuff.
| theStarfly chapter 15 . 6/16/2012
Hey! I really liked this story, and I was just wondering if it's still updating? Thanks!
| blackkitties chapter 15 . 6/15/2012
Oh how i love this story! I truly hope there will be another chapter and i didn't just get hooked on a story on hiatus...
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/23/2012
Please update this...I've been waiting forever... :(
| peopleinducenausea chapter 15 . 5/6/2012
Here goes. My begging.
This story is so unique and funny and interesting. I'm sure you know this, since you've only written 15 chapters and you have a surplus of 200 reviews...
Let me just remind you how awesome and clean-cut this story is. The characters are sharp, the plot is full and attention-grabbing, and Landon is amazing. I love this story so much. I've been checking up on it, like a freak, for a very long time. .
I know it's tough to keep writing when life gets weird or you have a dry period...but just don't forget about this one, OK? The characters are pretty unforgettable.