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IThinkIJustFoundHeaven chapter 15 . 4/24/2012
FRICK this is awesome. (I don't cuss anymore, so I use words like frick) I am usually a big prude about reading sex scenes if I'm not actually horny, and it's pretty hard to make me horny from just writing but you have the talent to write something I can read without dying from awkwardness and actually occasionally make me horny too. (That was embarrassing to admit) But I'm very pro LandonXHayden And Sam? I don't know, but I like him. I wanna know the deal between Andy and Landon, though! Don't forget they hate each other.
The Original Psycho chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Me again :) Sorry, just read a comment below and felt like I had to retaliate to it because I felt it seemed rather condescending towards you. As a writer (well, kind of, haha) I can understand constructive criticism as well as anyone else, but some comments (I know it is their opinion, but this is mine)that 'Bumblebee' made I disagree with.

One particular comment was that your stories lack excitement. As a word, I find 'exciting' quite hard to define as it can hold different meanings to a variety of people. For me, excitement in terms of reading means to grin when a story I love is updated, rush through the text eagerly once (then slowly read the parts I thought were really good a second time) and then swear under my breath when I realise there isn't another chapter afterwards. It means that while waiting for the next chapter I can't stop thinking about what might happen next. So, for me, this story is bloody exciting.

There was also a remark made that this had a spark that Friday Nights didn't - which is a fair comment, I guess, because it's personal preference to a certain extent. I also read Friday Nights, but I don't really agree that Friday Nights lacks a spark - at the beginning of that fic, I feel that the characters aren't as developed. However as the story has grown I think you've found your rhythm as a writer and your style has really blossomed. I think one of the hardest things to do is to create realistic, flawed and interesting characters that people can relate to and really care about. With this story, you've really hit that nail on the head (oh god, that sounded really cliched, haha).

Anyway, keep it up and update soon! x
AMS-SWF chapter 15 . 3/18/2012
I'm rotting for Sam, Landon's hot but I think I like them more as friends. To me it was clear from the start that Stephen wasn't it. Anyway, nice story!
The Original Psycho chapter 15 . 3/12/2012
Wow. Just read all of this in a day and absolutely love it. Please update soon :) I'm really rooting for Landon and Hayden to get together- I just think they act really sweetly around each other :)
JitteringMendacity chapter 15 . 3/11/2012
I keep thinking about this story, I can't wait for it to be updated~
JJ chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
This is actually really good! I kept going lololol, I'm not sure why though I'm assuming it was from my happy amusement. I'm really enjoying it

Good job and good

Luck!
supervirgin chapter 15 . 2/9/2012
he should so end up with landon
Bumblebee chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Eh.. Man, I just realised that Friday Night's author and you are the same person (I'm not keen of stalking the author, just the stories).

No offense, but this, and Friday Night are really different (for me, anyway). This have a certain spark that Friday Night lack of, seriously. My opinion on you just rised up; a good notch *_*

Keep it up o 3o

(p.s. Be more confident. I read your comment on 'Brothercest Only' topic in 'Slash Fiction Forum' just now. I'm not a writer, but I'm a vicious slash strories hunter since years (ficpress, fanfic, and other sites) and I've established that you are a good writer. Not that good yet.. But good. Your strories just lack the excitement? Or.. Something that makes reader want to keep reading your story until the end, or again and again.)
Fryvi chapter 15 . 1/22/2012
Awesome story:O *nosebleed*
AnonymousWriter chapter 15 . 1/21/2012
Wow...so Hayden and Steve-y boy broke up, huh? I would feel bad for Hayden, but I understand both of their viewpoints on this, so it's kind of hard to feel bad for one person more than the other.

And more importantly, this is Landon's chance to comfort him and make Hayden forget ALL about Stephen with a little bit of this and that lol. He'll need it, since he's one step above heartbroken. I wonder if Landon's been heartbroken before...well obviously he has been, but I mean like in a relationship and he just drunk it away like how Hayden will. Maybe because he had a bad relationship with someone he decided to not belong to anyone and become a porn star? Okay, nevermind that makes no sence.

I wonder if they'll be smutt in the next chapter. Wait, of course there will be. That's what drinking leads up to.

So what now? Now that the two broke up, will Hayden find someone else to stay with, or will he concentrate on completing the list?

And BTW, don't thank me for reviewing. I love reviewing your stor(ies). ;)
jamyward chapter 15 . 1/18/2012
hey, im not gonna lie im happy sephen and hayden broke up and i loved the ending part just the thought of hayden gettin drunk is amazing. update soon last time i was crying tears of blood waitin
Emmie Raye chapter 15 . 1/18/2012
YES WINNING! I feel so influential...and even if I didn't influence this, this made my day so just don't correct me. xD LOVELY MY DEAR LOVELY! Now lets bring the sexy back in and have him almost have a relationship with Hayden and then he leaves and moves on and Landon goes with him. And this is just what popped in my head...so surprise me! :)
H.s.s.Hunter chapter 15 . 1/18/2012
YEAAHH! I hated Stephan. Landon is so much cooler. Woohoo!
Starlette420 chapter 15 . 1/17/2012
MAN steven is such a dick. why did he even have to come back into Hayden's life? He needs to dissapear.

Landon on the other hand...needs to stay. And make Hayden's dream come true! XD

one more thing...Hayden as a top? NOOOOOOOooooOOOOoooo. please no. Why can't he be a bottom again only for SAM this time XD lol
prostock69 chapter 15 . 1/17/2012
Ch. 15: YES! I missed this story soooooo much. It's one of my favs.

I totally teared up when Stephen broke up with Hayden. I wanted that to happen; but I still felt bad for him!

Yes, Hayden should have been truthful up front. I really don't think Stephen would have dated him if he knew Hayden did porn. He's too straight laced and I feel he'd be too insecure about dating a porn star because his first time at having sex was horrible. And I know he's thinking "how can I possibly compete with Landon?" Because Landon and Hayden are so hot together. The sex was amazing as Stephen saw. So I don't think he would be able to overcome his insecurity and jealously and the trust issues to keep dating Hayden. I know I wouldn't be able to.

And I really liked the ending of this chapter when Landon told him they weren't girls (eating ice cream after a breakup)...they are going to get drunk! That IS such a guy thing! lol.
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