The story so far is great. I am a huge fan of your works. I hope that you will continue to reveal more about Damon's past and his relationship to Kaya. I was wondering also if you could give mre details about Kaya's family especially her father. I hope you continue writing. Update soon. Bye

I love this story! this was the first one I read and it got me hooked :P pls write some more i really want to know what happens next:)

DAAAAAMMMMOOOOOONNNN! Ha, I love him ) And he wasn't even in the chapter! I'm just excited for the next one because he'll be in that one D

First off, thank you for replying so quickly! I was on a study break and decided to check my account and saw your review, thanks. Once again, I probably shouldn't have read this since I probably should be studying right now. But I read this in my study breaks so hopefully that makes up for it.

Anyways onto this story. Once again, good job. When I saw the interview you had for Kaya I thought that she seemed pretty much like Callie but with a different name. While I see similarities between the two, I also see differences, which is good. There are a few grammer errors in the story that are a wee bit distracting. Also I find the fact that Kaya's mother instantly through her out a little hard to believe. I know that with her mother's past the fact that she hates damons is believeable, but considering that Kaya is her daughter and she did seem to love Kaya and put up with her being a half damon before, I find it a little strange how she was able to let Kaya go that quickly without even waiting for an explanation. However other then that the story is well done. Keep writing.

So since I actually reviewed last chapter, IT WOULDN'T LET ME REVIEW AGAIN :( Because, I reread Demon's Angel, and realized a TON of stuff. Like just how many references are made to say that there is something going on with Kaya and Damon, and little mentions of her that you wouldn't really recognize unless you were looking for them. Like when Damon's mother mentions Akuma and stuff and mutters to herself about a girl and how he acts different around her...stuff like that. He really does act different around Kaya, and its ADORABLE! I can't waaaait to read more!

Goodness me...what a strange phrase...ANYWAY, that's not the point, the point is that I FORGOT TO REVIEW THE LAST CHAPTER! I am soooo sorry! I love this story so much too! Like, how pathetic is that I legitimately sit around and watch my email when I don't have homework and read and reread these chapters? It's soooo sad. But this has got to be one of my fav story lines on Fictionpress, mostly because it is so refreshing. While there is a nice variety on this site, there are also hundreds of stories that are so much the same that it's scary...and I'm gonna shut up now and continuing reviewing this chapter. (If I updated my stories as much as I ramble in reviews I would've written 4 novels by now...really, I NEED A LIFE). So I like this chapter, even if Damon isn't in it :( :( :( I mean, common, who doesn't love a sexy demon from Hell? Damon's like that guy that you walk by at the beach or something and all you think immediately is "Hot damn he's hot"...but this was still and interesting chapter, and it helped further the story/explain more. Yeah. (In case you're wondering why I'm so rambling and just plain rambling today, it's becuase I just had cake, and had already finished my homework...like the worst combination ever for hyperness.) Love ya! ~Kitty

K last review made no sense ... Sorry about that I guess I assumed I wrote that about Damon... So you just get to see how much I really enjoyed his character... And that would be a double usage of an adjective but... I stand by it.I just love to not like him , but I do enjoy your writing! Keep up the great work!

You know how to make me review again... Hahahaha. When I said morose I meant that he seems withdrawn with his past, emotions and feelings when communicating with his sister. His made me think of his character as being complex which made him more intriguing ...: am I making since... It's a quality that I love to find in fiction or life in general.

DAMON! DAAAAAMMMMOOOOONNNN! He is WAY better than awesome ! He was definitely (and still is) my favorite of the demons. Hehe I like him and Kaya together ;)

And she got put in the thingy? To be the leader? Cuz she creates vampire thingies? Like Caleb? Whoa, weirdness. WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO?

Well, I know what YOU, Deadly Fang, are going to do. UPDATE! ) soon? please?

Omg, please update this story ! After I read the first one, I was so excited to fnd out tht there's a sequel. :) I stayed up until 5am just to read everything. You are an amazing author and I hope that you get way more reviews for this story because you totally deserve it :)

I love your story but,was wondering if there will be more

LOVE ur style of writing! LOVE the themes of the books! LOVE how u have me hooked! LOVE the characters! LOVE the demon side, as well as the angel side! LOVE the authors notes! and LOVE the mentions of readers! it made me happy when u say peoples names and thank them, as well as answering questions! You are sooo effing awesome, and i cant wait to read the rest of this book AND the ones to come (at least, I hope theres more :P )

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Yeah, I have no idea where I go this name from. Damon is definitely a subject of interest. Lol I luv the bunny pajama's party. Kaya is so funny... Even tho she kind of has a thing for talking to herself. But I do that anyways. Update soon!

LOL! There better be an awesome demon in the next chapter or I will be seriously disappointed. SO this guy...is he dead or alive or what? Kind of confusing, but I'm sure they'll get it all figured out eventually. later )

I love this! Its so interesting, just how different Kaya and Callie are. Callie had this sort of "confused, worried, powerful depressed/kinda" aura going on, while Kaya has this "Don't mess with me or I'll reap you, I talk to myself and kick ass" sort of aura. It's preeety damn awesome! I love Kaya and Callie eeeequaly though...and I can't WAIT to see who shows up in the next chapter...I also can't wait to find out why the human guys didn't die...strange...okay I sound like a complete freak right now so I'm just gonna stop typing :)