Reviews for Sanctimony
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
I love your analogies and your deep meanings. It's really hard to findpeople who put a lot of meaning into their poems. Really good job.;)
WriterOnTheMove chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
really great images in this piece, and i like the way you formatted the paragraphs into stanzas. Really good :)

nickyO chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
"pacing the meeting places of my childhood", I like the slight turning point or rather turning away point that flows from this line. Focus on the future but allow yourself the space to gather determination...lovely.
HeroofEnelios chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Your pieces get more heartfelt and meaningful each time. I loved this one a lot.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
What a starkly graphic word picture of a tortured soul laid bare in public. The shocking climax jolted me, until I realized how everything built up naturally to it.

A fine-tuned piece of work.