Reviews for Sanctimony
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
I love your analogies and your deep meanings. It's really hard to findpeople who put a lot of meaning into their poems. Really good job.;)
WriterOnTheMove chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
really great images in this piece, and i like the way you formatted the paragraphs into stanzas. Really good :)

WriterOnTheMove
nickyO chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
"pacing the meeting places of my childhood", I like the slight turning point or rather turning away point that flows from this line. Focus on the future but allow yourself the space to gather determination...lovely.
The lone canine chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Your pieces get more heartfelt and meaningful each time. I loved this one a lot.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
What a starkly graphic word picture of a tortured soul laid bare in public. The shocking climax jolted me, until I realized how everything built up naturally to it.

A fine-tuned piece of work.