Reviews for Terra Firma Year One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Badass .. continue reading... haha due to slow internet, I actually thought there are only two chaps, glad there's more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great.. I enjoyed the story! Please update.. it was damn cool! XD |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good chp! Can't wait 4 the next update! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow i so wan'texpecting that twist! how mean of him! anyway loved the chapter! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you had a beta this would be perfect. Well written and interesting, my only complaints are the odd spelling error I find (and we all make those). I do think the new Knights obtained their ranks a bit too quickly, but considering Knights can only rank up if another one dies it's easily allowed. I know that Dracul represents speed among the knights and Rosemary represents wisdom, but what of the others? Anyway, keep this up. Looking forward to reading more. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Dracul was actually really cool in this chapter! :) sorry it took me so log to read! it was good! anticipationg more. |
![]() ![]() Sweet. dracul kicks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! :) cant wait to see what happens to each of the groups hehe no hesitation lol! |
![]() ![]() great chapter cant wait to see wat happen next |