Reviews for I Want to Be Elusive
Erysimum chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
The first stanza is so relatable! I hate people saying that. And I really love the title :D Concrit...I think it would've worked just as well without the formatting in stanza two. And I somehow think the poem's impact comes at the end of the fourth stanza. "After all, / You walk all over me" would make a really powerful ending statement. But that's just my opinion, as opposed to any actual fault in the poem. I liked it! :)