|Reviews for Whatever Happened to the Sunrise?|
| SparrowsOfTheTrees chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
This is breathtaking. well done!
| the poison apple chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
The story is well written and I liked it :)
Piece of advice: don't say 'this is better than it sounds, I suck at summaries, etc' in your summary. It makes the reader feel as if you have a low self esteem and puts them off too. Be confident about what you are writing.
Anyhow, good job!
| Avec Plaisir chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
I like the imagery, the metaphors and the rest of your diction. It's really very good and well-written, though its a little slow.