Reviews for Whatever Happened to the Sunrise?
SparrowsOfTheTrees chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
This is breathtaking. well done!
the poison apple chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
The story is well written and I liked it :)

Piece of advice: don't say 'this is better than it sounds, I suck at summaries, etc' in your summary. It makes the reader feel as if you have a low self esteem and puts them off too. Be confident about what you are writing.

Anyhow, good job!
Avec Plaisir chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
I like the imagery, the metaphors and the rest of your diction. It's really very good and well-written, though its a little slow.