|Reviews for About the Author|
| KayEn78 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Although this is a very short biography of famous author Bill Thompson, we catch a little insight into his character and we learn about all of his medical issues and illnesses.
| Timepieces chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
This sounds like a great character!
My advice for technical writing would be to shorten your verb phrases. 'He had written' might be better as 'he wrote', or 'Bill is' as 'Bill's'. The way you have it written makes it sound more stiff and formal, although I don't know if you meant it to be that way.
Content wise - it might be better to let your ideas grouped in the paragraph. All the things about his novels in one section and and his family stuff in another.
I hope that helps, and that you have a good day!