|Reviews for November Skies|
| Social Anxiety Lives chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
The title of this poem reminds me of the title 'October Sky'. However, I feel like they will not be similar. Still, a very nice connection in my mind. I would like to see some line enjambment. It just pushes the poem further into a direction of great flow and reading rhythm. I love the sound of the line "In brilliance un-equalled by grey of winter". You are creating such beautiful images with your words. I can close my eyes and brought to a beautiful naturalistic place. The images are so fresh and creative. You avoided the cliché trap and I am glad for it. Your use of onomatopoeia is fabulous in the third stanza and also sensory words were evident. Oh, take out the last line! The poem was like honey to my eyes and it crashed at that last line!
| jenxrawr chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
A rather eloquent little poem with a rich vocabulary and stunning ending.
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Love it :)