|Reviews for The Distraction|
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
Wow... you are like completely becoming my favorite author! XD
I have only one suggestion for this one... well maybe two; the first being your use of 'polished' armor at the beginning of this story. I think the sentence would read more coherently as 'dutifully polished'. My second issue being the Rad-something-or-another guy, I think you focused too much on him as a character, rather than the sorcerer. I see what you were trying to do with the character, but it makes it seem as if he is a centralized figure of the main story. -Though this is a one shot, and he kinda is- He took too much attention off of the main character.
Other than that I loved it, and would love to see more about these two! XD
Thanks for the read,
| Kixi chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Me gusta. Mucho. This was slightly humorous, just tinged with sarcasm and a beautiful, easy and effortless flow. Also, attitude appreciated.
| twilightserius chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
| anydayanywhere chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
I really enjoyed reading this. The characters were also very interesting~ :D
| OnceUponAFeudalFairytale chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This was really good! Your style of writing is humorous and interesting.
| Iris Orchad chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
As always I love your writing, it's a gift to be appreciated. If this is what you do when bored, I wonder what you'll write when you have writer's block, even with that you'll probably be able to write something good. Well, great work on this one love and keep at it! :D
| Pixie611 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Yeahh i couldnt be arsedd to log in SUE ME! XD
OMG the way you write is amazing! This was an amazing story!
I noticed how you added in a Harry Potter quote... i was OMG!
Awesssssomee storyy! :)