|Reviews for I Am Barely Standing|
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
This is so sad...I don't want them to die or wither away
I love the crayon Comparison it's just so sad
Especially at the end when they colespe
It's like a freaky hallucination!
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
This is beautiful and I love the crisp clear and blunt imagery you use! Superb! I can totally relate to this in the context of obstacles that we face in life! Very clear and I like how you repeated that one line!