Reviews for Amy
sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
My patents,
My *parents

and mom thinks
and *Mom thinks
The context in which you used it was as a person's name, so you have to capitalize.

The teacher is talking, scribbling in his shitty handwriting all over the blackboard, which is actually green, but still is called a blackboard.

Dude I never noticed that. You're amazing XD

Pulsie, this story literally made me cry. I got so emotional. I love this story so much. My heart broke and reassembled itself a million times during this.

I really can relate to this story. The emotion is so raw, so realistic...it's really beautiful.
Aurora Johnson chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Powerful stuff :)

I absolutely love this, i like the way the lines alternate between speech and actual thought. Some people find the individual lines of prose really stilted and difficult to read (i write like that too) but i think it suits the story perfectly.

Anyway, just thought i'd drop you a line. Your writing is brilliant. I will go check out your other stuff!

x