|Reviews for Elvin Warrior|
| The Gypsy King chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
After reading your first paragraph i already wanted to punch your main character in her pretentious face.
No offense. But seriously...why should I want to read about an arrogent and apparantly psycho chick who's ready to gut random passerby who say hello? Beautiful Elven warriors don't do it for me. I need a character who intrigues me, not inspire hatred from the get-go.
Try giving her some flaws. Or make her act like a real person.
And really, every man in the army wants her? Are there no gay men in her world?
| J. Raed chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Ooh,interesting! I'm excited for the next chapter!