aww this story was super cute i loved it

Cute

This is beautiful, thank you!

Oh my gosh this was so good! I was smiling the whole time, thank you for sharing this with us.

Okay so, you're probably not going to believe this, but I'll tell you anyway. I've had this one-shot on my to-read list for so long... So today, seeing as I was at an airport waiting to board a plane home, I decided the timing was right. I got so hooked. It was so sweet and well written. I was more than halfway through when we were called in to board, and imagine my face when I looked at my boarding pass and realised my seat was 23A! Like, FOR REAL! I boarded the plane and finished reading this while people kept boarding. I had my eye out in case some nice-looking guy (or just, nice) sat beside me. But no, much to my dismay 23B was left empty... So yep, the coincidence was such I just has to share this with you! That said, I loved this. It was so perfect. And for someone who rides planes almost twice a month, it gives me hope that something interesting might happen to me!

I loved this!

That was actually kind of cute. I recently realised that I actually hated airports, but this one made them acceptable enough. Heehee

THIS IS SO CUTE I squealed at the end of the story
They are too adorable 3 Love love love this

YES! This was perfection. I was about to read one of your novels, but I needed a quick one-shot for my study break, so this was the perfect fix! 3 Great story.

Awwwwww :') that was so cute and sweet! Soul mates!

Aw that was super sweet

Very beautifully written. Im glad i jump to a story that is not about high school students.

They are adorable!

You're so succinct in your descriptions that even in the short length of this piece I felt the ups and downs of the character's emotions. Your detail is also really effective in making the characters and situations feel all the more real and relatable, and I especially adore the tug and pull between the witty and clumsy dialogue that makes the characters come to life.

It was also a good choice to focus solely on the point from which they meet, to the point in which they realize their feelings for each other - and I think that's all it took to get the message across. The whole 'take chances' is so universal, that it doesn't matter that here it is applied to romantic situations, it makes the piece itself more universal. There were some typo's riddled throughout, but it didn't detract much simply because it was a lovely read.

Just short, sweet, and well-written!

aww, that was a super sweet story :)