Reviews for Walk Away chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
...this is miraculous. you have a way with stretching out words to fit entire paragraphs and yet still keep interest in every word you have to say. you perfectly described everything. and how you bring in the dirt dust and gravel over and over again without it sounding repetitive is amazing too. keep writing, i'd love to keep reading more.
Velvet Vixen chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
This one was a bit of a slow starter for me but it got better and better as it went on. It was very beautiful and I really liked it, nicely done :)