Reviews for A friend in need
Non.graceful chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Kept me on my toes! Not many people on this site actually write decent poetry- myself included- but that was far from decent! That was great.

One line that didn't sit well with me:

sets me a daze

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That line didn't suit the poem right in my opinion because, it makes you think that the person is amazed or surprised as to what the antagonist does to her/him, the protagonist. 'a blaze', now that's what I would have used. The antagonist most likely annoys her enough to set her heart on fire.

My opinions. One sided and a different point of view.

Grace