|Reviews for A friend in need|
| Non.graceful chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Kept me on my toes! Not many people on this site actually write decent poetry- myself included- but that was far from decent! That was great.
One line that didn't sit well with me:
sets me a daze
That line didn't suit the poem right in my opinion because, it makes you think that the person is amazed or surprised as to what the antagonist does to her/him, the protagonist. 'a blaze', now that's what I would have used. The antagonist most likely annoys her enough to set her heart on fire.
My opinions. One sided and a different point of view.