|Reviews for Memories|
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Great poem! I love the imagery of the box of photos, and the way you build up quite a warm, cosy tone in the first stanza only to shatter it in the second (particularly with the line "The day you lost your sister"). My favourite line is: "We whisper through the moments".
There are only a couple of typos:
[The day they set of the alarm] - this should say "off".
[But the pasts what we know best] - this should say "past's".