|Reviews for Such a Nice Boy|
| Eden Green chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
'...We loved each other so'. That line feels a little stilted to me, and disrupts the flow somewhat. I would suggest a little word play instead. I do however love your last two lines. They were brilliant. Well done!
| Bee chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Ah creepy boy but very good :)