Reviews for Orphanage
VelvetyCheerio chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
I love stories that are based off of dreams, though I wonder, was this a dream for you or a nightmare?

I like the way the perspective shifts throughout the story, even for the man(?) with the cane and how he ended up dying. I liked how his thoughts were cut off rather than that scene just ending abruptly. It played on the horror, I thought.

Sucks to be him, though. What a horrible way to go. D:

The way the story repeats itself was cool, too. It's almost like those horror movies where the demon child just finds another family to torture, except in this case, said child really just wants to be left alone so she can't hurt anyone.

Fun story. I enjoyed it!

Velvet.
Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Rather descriptive and beautiful. Like a sinister kind of beauty, evil. It disgusted me by how much blood there was, but good writers always make the reader feel what they're writing.

Too bad everyone else is dead. If only adults would listen..

ILOVEIT.