Reviews for To an outsider
ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Very thought-provoking and meaningful theme, especially given the path of contemporary society. Well written!
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Profound piece, I like the symbolism in this and the idea behind. Thoughtfully written too. Good job! Keep it up .
3M2R chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Only have a word for this: wow.

I am at loss for words. Everything just swarms in and stack on one another. Profound piece of writing. Ahh... I need to find somewhere to hide myself and my writes!
AshlynHibbs chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
X') You have a real way with words, my friend!

I wish I was good at poetry! Especially as good as this!

You did a wonderful job. This is truly a gem of free-form poetry. :)

I love how you plant ideas in the poem. It shows professional symbolism. My favorite was the line, "in a river tainted with the suicidal corpses of freedom." One can really sit and think about this. :) You can tell it's thoughtfully written, and it feels as though human feelings were behind it in writing.

Nicely done~
Punslinger chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Excellent. A profound bit of introspection presented with fine poetic craftsmanship. Quite worthy of the Emerson quote.