Great

I have been waiting with anticipation for this chapter for some time. Thanks for updating and not giving up on this story. I liked the banter between the three of them. Though it would have been nice to read about Seth’s interaction with Ethan’s mom in more depth. Could you also re-upload it as it has the formatting characters and makes it challenging to read some. Excited to read what happens next!

Okay, Seth is actually hilarious and I already love this story and the dynamic they have. Also, you might wanna re-upload the chapter bc all the code and stuff popped up along with the words. Granted, it wasn't too difficult to read around, but you still might wanna fix that. You started this story so long ago that I doubt you will continue it, but if you do I am definitely following along right behind you.

I love it! Super complex and honest, and also hysterical!

I hope cassie don't become a surrogate. She is new to sex and motherhood is not funny thing to mess with. We use surrogate term to dehumanize the word motherhod in clinical way. But it is very serious matter and has mental impact on people. I hope cassie knows that the psychological trama sometimes females face in surogacy. Being surrogate is not for everyone. Screening is very important for the canditates. Being in health care i have seen women suffer in this matter. I hope cassie growup and smell the coffee that being surrogate is not for everyone and definately not a child's play.

I'm loving the developments. I really like that Ethan, Cass and Seth are going to try their hand at a relationship. This has to give rise to an amazing plot.

That chapter was so small though! I can't wait for your next update.

Oh shit. Cass.

I didn't know until today that you had changed everything. I really like the edit though and the surrogacy plot is very interesting.

I really enjoyed reading the whole story and I hope you update soon. (:

Ok, so the plot emerges, and it's a... love triangle? Frankly, that makes me a little nervous. Triangles are seldom well done, but since this one's an unusual one maybe it'd work out. I started out seeing this story as being in the humourous vein, in spite of its heavy subject matter. I wonder how that'd go down with all the angstiness you have in store. I hope you keep it light anyway, cause it'd be a pity if this unusual premise turned into just another teenage drama. Me, I don't care about labels. Go ahead and label everyone, and bring on the stereotypes!

Hi! I first started reading this at wattpad but I really wanted to comment anonymously so here I go :)

This story should be continued, tbh, I really like the thought of having one female and two males in a relationship. I hope that ending would be something a long the lines of the Best Friend and his Boyfriend accept the main lead and they have a happily ever after lmao cx Maybe you can write that Cassie starts distancing herself from Ethan and Seth and when Ethan realizes what happens he and Seth starts talking and then all three can get together? Just throwing it out there! But I think that would be a good story :) anyways I look forward to the next chapter :D

A plot! A plot! I see a plot! XD I like it.

The revelations didn't change who I ship. I still ship the three of them. -w- and I didn't think this chapter ws heavy at all. O:

I'm actually surprisingly looking forward to this whole plot thing. The character clarifications at the end have me hoping that you are not going to let a great chance to explore the emotional depth of these characters slip. As for the continuity of everything I have no complaints thus far keep up the great work.

Tippy another chapter! Look at you all KGB sneaking in a plot when we all think we're getting a fun sex romp (j/k) most excellent BJ scene and with cascading water what a way to paint a picture.

I appreciate your addition of the details, Seth essentially a latchkey kid and Cassie emancipated but the best bit was Ethan being labeled gay (even though labels should only be on cans) but Cassie is the exception. I really connected w/ Cassie saying she knew what she was asking for but she really didn't when she got it. Real life is often more complicated than we suspect it to be.

Thanks for the update much appreciated!

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Hmm... you’re rather good at building things up and then putting the brakes on at the critical moment. For Cassie anyway, if not the guys. It’s sweet (I overuse the word, sorry) that Ethan tries to explain to her that it’s not that he doesn’t want to, he just can’t. 0_0 That came out wrong, but you get what I mean.
On the finger action, it’s never occurred to me before, but do girls have more options when it comes to stimulation that leads to release? Could the same thing happen if it were Cass doing that to Ethan? Or does it have anything to do with her (technical) V status and so everything is fresh and new to her?
Hey, why don’t you have exactly that happen? Let Cass try something on Ethan that usually takes Seth to do. As an experiment. That could lead to complications of Seth getting jealous/feeling betrayed, Ethan coming to realise that he could in theory (and practice) be satisfied by a girl, etc etc. Oopsie, am I being bossy? Sorry... I just HAVE to have a plot in everything I read, and if there isn’t one, I’ll invent one myself.