Reviews for On Going Unnoticed |
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![]() ![]() This was sweet and angsty to read. Thank you for sharing this! I adore Sterling (Ling), and think he gave in too easily to Chris (Im half joking, I know Chris took a year and we're only getting Sterling's perspective)! But it also felt realistic/more organic and true to Sterling's character that he did. Each character felt fleshed out enough that we got some idea of who they were and the two main characters were as well. It reads well too, your prose is nice Thanks! Take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story to death. I'm pretty sure I was crying almost the whole time I was reading this, no joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really like boyxboy but this story is beautiful |
![]() ![]() I'm extremely thankful my sister is sleeping right now other wise she would see me crying. Really, I didn't know what FictionPress was I just saw this on you DeviantArt and decided to read this. I can honestly say I don't regret that decision. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good. I really, really like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should write another story in Chris's pov. |
![]() ![]() *sigh* makes me wish I find 'the one' already... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so wonderful! i felt like i've been through a roller coaster with my emotions after reading this one! thank you so much for this! |
![]() ![]() This is very well done. The only complaint I have is that you didn't describe what each of the characters looked like. Next time, paint an image for your reader on what each person looks like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this, the entire thing from start to finish. sterling and Chris are perfect and I nearly cried toward the ending. Beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww that was so adorable and angsty and fluffy and TOTALLY EPICNESS! you took the cliche plotline and brought it up a billion levels that was possibly the best amnesia fic i've ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was just simply amazing. I love everything about it and i just love your style of writing and how it can evoke such strong feelings out of your readers. I almost cried...but so glad that it all ended well. I hope you could write about them more. I would love to read about their life after...but i can understand if that's it for their story :) Anyway, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() I love this story haha! It was very good! |
![]() ![]() I love this story a lot. It's lovely. :) It's really sweet, a bit cliched maybe, but sweet. :D And did I mention sweet? Haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much love for this story right now. Your writing is appreciated. |