Reviews for Why Can't I?
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
This is really good. I love the point of veiw and the insight given. Its really good :-D
Unpredictable Convictions chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I like the title. It sounds really familiar, you know... Anyway, I like the meaning, and I just read your profile as well. You hate having to over analyze good books in school too? No way!

Anyway, I like the message of your poem, and its just one I those topic that everyone can relate to. It's a well written piece, and you've managed to accomplish something that I've never been able to do. Use punctuation in a poem.
J112011 chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Wow, this is very good. I don't think I've seen a poem with this point of view before.