Reviews for Heartfelt Surrender |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It’s been 5 years and I’ll still check to see if this story has been updated... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hellooo, I hope you're doing well Author. I love this book and I would love to see it updated(I'm secretly hoping it's already finished, hehe) Best regards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing chapter and story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Rea, like Porter, and intrigued by Harver. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's great to see Andrea and Caleb in a chapter finally. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rea gives me the Captain America vibes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is intriguing, thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() when she says she wont leave for 8 months again so she leaves for 3 years |
![]() ![]() I think the story's great but there's too much unnecessary information like all the characters' birthdays and hometowns and the list of names for the register. The chapters are already really long so all the that extra info is not needed, and you don't need to introduce every single character at the same time becoz the whole chapter becomes tedious to read and a little boring and no ones gonna remember all that anyway, I certainly didn't, if anything it caused a lot of confusion. Other than that great storyline. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please..need...update... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss this story. Looked at the date and realized how long it's been. I hope you're ok and still have plans to continue writing it. |
![]() ![]() Please tell us, are you still writing? |
![]() ![]() One question, are you still writing? Merry Christmas :) |
![]() ![]() Next chapter please |
![]() ![]() Oh noooo, not the General! I really liked him! Poor Caleb :-*( Oh my god, I'm head over heels in love with your story :-D Your writing skills are awesome. This is my favorit story on FictionPress. |