Reviews for Toxic
Clawstrike590 chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
Ugh. It's been five days since you uploaded it and i only noticed today!

Anyway. The chapter is great. Can't wait for the next one. Although I'm a bit sad that it's the last. I'm just hoping the next story still surrounds the world you've created. Can't wait to read more of it!

Your faithful reader,

the unbirthday girl chapter 3 . 12/14/2011
Aw. Josie's right, of course. A sister knows.:D
black-misty-sky chapter 3 . 12/13/2011
kwl, cant wait for th enext chapter :)
black-misty-sky chapter 2 . 11/28/2011

DAMN! i wish it was bigger then a three shot though! cuz it would be really great as a full length story! :).

I love your writing style!

the unbirthday girl chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
That was very...interesting. *tries not to laugh* Nice chapter. For some reason, their awkward interactions make me feel like rolling on the floor and laughing hysterically. Hmm.:D
Clawstrike590 chapter 2 . 11/25/2011
Really, really awesome. You can feel the tension between them. Wow. Update soon!

Your reader,

the unbirthday girl chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
This is great, awesome characters, really. Great job, Jules!:)
Clawstrike590 chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Nicely done. Can't wait for the line itself. Keep it up!
CherryRipeKisses chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I really like it. I can see you've put a lot of thought into the universe of the story and I have to say that the universe is pretty cool! Sara is damn sexy but you didn't describe Roy. Will you describe him?

Anyways, I LOVED it. Seriously. Keep writing :P
Sasquatch818 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I loved it! It is sooo not fictionpress worthy! All your books aren't! Publish. I will def buy them! you are a wondeful writer with amazing talents. UD soon:D