Reviews for Hadyn: Building the Pack
whoz.ella chapter 15 . 8/31/2016
This one is even better...
I like it ... a lot
Thank you again
Shiina chapter 15 . 8/29/2016
Seriously, you're laying on way to thick this whole "Hadyn is hated by all, poor martyr! but he always help the innocent, ask for nothing in return, he's pratically Jesus yada yada"
He's supposed to be smart but he's convinently oblivious when it's needed. I don't buy it. Like "why are you telling of all my good samaritan accomplishments. I don't see your point (lol), it's not like I did anything special" Ugh!
Shiina chapter 4 . 8/28/2016
Yay! Hadyn, go save the day :D
Shiina chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
It's so confusing not to know anyone's age especially when the only clue is "child", he or she could be somewhere between 5 and 16. So, yeah... hard to picture.
Also, I am the only one who finds it strange that we still don't know at this point in the story what kind of Were they are? Like are they wolfs or something else? Isn't there power play, with more powerful Weres than others? What about Alphas, Betas, Omegas? And what the hell are the Keepers? So much info lacking, I hope I get answers quick.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
You have writgen "does" as "dose" for a while, fix please?
PedobearDemoness chapter 10 . 7/6/2014
I really like this story, but I feel like Hadyn is too revealibg. Why does he tell people anout the stuff he's been through? He tells his life story to every freaking person he meets!
Nea.M chapter 2 . 4/25/2014
ALERT! you said for a fact that seim was born when hadyn was 17,, but it says here that hadyn encountered a lash demon at 14, and that seim threw it to the water and keev drowned it...
just a prompt...
Boondoxgirl chapter 15 . 4/12/2012
I absolutely love this story. Great dialogue and story plot. I can't wait to see what comes next.
lovesyoumore chapter 15 . 4/12/2012
absolutely love this story! can't wait for more
RawrImaDinoKitten chapter 15 . 4/11/2012
So excited, and now I have to wait for more? Urgh, you're killin' me here! ToT


I shall faithfully follow the newest edition, and story about the fairies? lmao
kiki19857 chapter 15 . 4/11/2012
I would like to know about Fairies too :)
RawrImaDinoKitten chapter 14 . 4/6/2012
Awe, little Gloria, Hadyn just leaves everyone confuzzled doesn't he? Poor thing, don't worry, you'll learn eventually haha

Gosh, I continue to love Kerien and Hadyn :)

O.o Woah. So Nate had like, three other people he sleeps with or is it just Eli? I am curious about the relationship between.

Look foward to your next update!
That Boy over There chapter 14 . 3/31/2012
Draco volans chapter 12 . 3/18/2012
Looking forward to seeing more.
RawrImaDinoKitten chapter 12 . 3/11/2012
Ooooooh, Nate? New vamp boy, friend of Hadyn's, very interesting. I can't wait to hear more about their particular relationship.

Plus I wanna see how Kerien reacts to Hadyn getting all buddy buddy with a vampire XD Lmao

Still loving the story, so please update soon!
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