This one is even better...
I like it ... a lot
Thank you again

Seriously, you're laying on way to thick this whole "Hadyn is hated by all, poor martyr! but he always help the innocent, ask for nothing in return, he's pratically Jesus yada yada"
He's supposed to be smart but he's convinently oblivious when it's needed. I don't buy it. Like "why are you telling of all my good samaritan accomplishments. I don't see your point (lol), it's not like I did anything special" Ugh!

Yay! Hadyn, go save the day :D

It's so confusing not to know anyone's age especially when the only clue is "child", he or she could be somewhere between 5 and 16. So, yeah... hard to picture.
Also, I am the only one who finds it strange that we still don't know at this point in the story what kind of Were they are? Like are they wolfs or something else? Isn't there power play, with more powerful Weres than others? What about Alphas, Betas, Omegas? And what the hell are the Keepers? So much info lacking, I hope I get answers quick.

You have writgen "does" as "dose" for a while, fix please?

I really like this story, but I feel like Hadyn is too revealibg. Why does he tell people anout the stuff he's been through? He tells his life story to every freaking person he meets!

ALERT! you said for a fact that seim was born when hadyn was 17,, but it says here that hadyn encountered a lash demon at 14, and that seim threw it to the water and keev drowned it...
just a prompt...
:D

I absolutely love this story. Great dialogue and story plot. I can't wait to see what comes next.

absolutely love this story! can't wait for more

So excited, and now I have to wait for more? Urgh, you're killin' me here! ToT

Anyways!

I shall faithfully follow the newest edition, and story about the fairies? lmao

I would like to know about Fairies too :)

Awe, little Gloria, Hadyn just leaves everyone confuzzled doesn't he? Poor thing, don't worry, you'll learn eventually haha

Gosh, I continue to love Kerien and Hadyn :)

O.o Woah. So Nate had like, three other people he sleeps with or is it just Eli? I am curious about the relationship between.

Look foward to your next update!

THIS just THIS

Looking forward to seeing more.

Ooooooh, Nate? New vamp boy, friend of Hadyn's, very interesting. I can't wait to hear more about their particular relationship.

Plus I wanna see how Kerien reacts to Hadyn getting all buddy buddy with a vampire XD Lmao

Still loving the story, so please update soon!