|Reviews for Hadyn: Building the Pack|
| That Boy over There chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
Kerien was doing so well. I can't wait to see how he reacts to porting though :P
| Solo1222 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
i started the hadyn book/books this morning before work and got caught up in them. i like them very much and was wondering if the third section is still to come or if i am somehow missing it?my only critique would be that id like the fights to be more detailed.
i look forward to reading more about hadyn and his packs adventures.
| That Boy over There chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
I am so excited to see what the dragons have to say and what happens and in general in relation to this story. This beautiful.
| ChAsLu chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
You revealed some personality and reason for hadyn's character...
never occur to me to ask that...( about the dragon's gender thing)
i love how they are protective of hadyn... maybe in this arc you'll expand about kerien's personality... i understand his now protective and all... and nice to know that the keeper's description in this story will be explain to(knows it keeps the story going and all)
oh and you might want to disable the anonymous review... so people who doesn't have an account can also give you their opinions
| lovesyoumore chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
I Love It
Great Story. Keep going:D
| bloodyrose genius chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Hi!yay! I'm the 1st person reviewing XP
i finsihed reading Hadyn and I gotta say it was AWESOME! It was
really fun, well written. and witty.
I'm so glad you wrote a sequel and wish you luck.
I think your dialogues are well done; they're funny and smooth, not bumpy and akward like how some writers write.