Reviews for The Academy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was cool. Another cool Story, I enjoyed it, thanks. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaawwww. I like this ending. Good Job. :) You're right Samuel, Sam... :) I loved the Story! Epilogue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh geez... say's she loves one and kisses another. Might as well have a big threesome. Honestly I can't pick between Sam & Jake. Both very suitable Men. ;) I hope Sam lives though! But it would narrow it down though... NO. Sam's gotta live! Wow, how many times has Sam saved Kiara... twice. I'm so stuck. WAAH. Choose for me! Except Andrew. It's not like I don't like Andrew just not like.. that... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm good with Sam or Jake. Either is good for me. I think Jake might be better due to him being more open to her, but then there's Sam. Hottie Aleeerrrrtttt. So either's good. Just not Andrew :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez. She's got 3 Guy's on her mind. My List is 1)Sam 2)Jake 3)Andrew :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh. Matt Lanter. I was into Jake, but I prefer Sam. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Interesting Plot. Cool! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() As this was categorized as romance fiction, I wasn't expecting a whole lot out of The Academy but I found this very well written and thought out. The characters are well developed as well as the plot. It's a really enjoyable read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww so sad. Can't wait for them to find each other again :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww. This is a really good story. haha. Yeah, it's funny, because when I first started reading this story, I was expecting some "action" like battle scenes, and all, then you came up with the dance/ball, and I was like, "hey what's going on?" Honestly, I stopped reading this story after the chapter about the dance; I kinda lost interest. It's just now that I started reading it again after seeing it in my bookmarks list. but hey, though my expectations weren't matched, I'd say that you did a good job with the matching, Jules and Ethan, with Willow, with Kiara, Sam, Andrew and Jake and also with describing emotions. It's a good read really. can't wait for the next story. :-) P.S. DOES THIS MEAN THAT I'D BE ABLE TO DATE JAKE NOW? *since Kiara and Sam ended up with each other and May's engaged* |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's such a nice ending! So sweet:) I'm looking forward to your next story:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh! Nooo! Even though I'm super happy I finished this story I am also a bit sad. I love your writing and I loved this extra chapter. Are you planning to do any additional chapters concerning either May or the rest of the group? I'm just curious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the name Sam :) But anyway, I think your plot was really interesting. I think that maybe the pace was a little quick? I couldn't really tell when Kiara started to like/love Jake/Sam. Maybe you could show a bit more emotional scenes? I don't know...but I feel like I didn't quite get to know the characters enough. I still really liked the story though. The bit of suspense near the end. The developing friendship and how they tried to keep each other afloat. It was great. |