|Reviews for apostrophe s|
| IDKmyBFFJill chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
This is very, very good. My only suggestion would be to change the last word to speak. Since the poem deals with the function of a noun and I've always heard words referred to as speaking or 'having voice' but not 'talking'. But that's a tiny nit-pick.
This is very evocative. I think good poetry should evoke rather than state. You should get a feeling of the concepts not have them spelled out literally. This is a great example of that.
I'll reiterate. This is very, very good. Thanks for sharing.
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
"were all those sunday night dreams of / growing old together and / forever passing notes in school [...] nothing to you or i or / anyone in this confounded place?"