Reviews for Story of A Suicide Boy
TheHorseWrider chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
I can see how this was funny. I laughed at the plant part, and the coffee thing was cute, but in all honesty, I think that the ending was kind of sudden. It was talking about how he was making distractions and everything, and then 'he walked to the bookstore and bought a coffe'. See how plain that is? You could use some descriptive words throughout the whole story to spice it up.