|Reviews for ForeverElements|
| listeninggame chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Sad ending for a first chapter. But I like it. You have captured my interest. I want to see where this goes.
| Starsis chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I really like it! :) I think you know who this is :D:D:D. Come back on soon!
| Arella White chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Cool. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!
If you want to chek out my story. it's called Forget Me Not.
| Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
I think this is vary good. Only thing maybe a little less "I"
I know it's hard, and I know if you look at my stories you'd say, "Hey, you do the same thing." and I'm working on it too. best of luck to you. Want to see what's next.
| A World On Fire chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
I love your story so far... My only complaint is it is too short! WHY DID YOU NOT MAKE IT LONGER! i have to go and pout now... Any way. I will definately kepp looking for when you post the next chapter. And i know what you are thinking... it looks MUCH longer when its writen in a notebook rather than on the computor. Please keep me updated on your story. You are an amazing author!
Alyson a.k.a. Kittybunny
| IDreamOfLullaby's chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
hmmm i actually really liked it...now youve got me curious. what is the secret?
anywho you probably won't tell me...hmm i quite liked your writing style but just try no to use "I" so much... dont worry it's easy to fix . i had the same problem when i was writing my stories on fan fiction
great job :P