Excellent!

You probably should put a warning on this chapter so people will know incest is involved in this chapter. Of course it's pretty hard to take the story seriously after non-lubricated toilet sex, but I did not see this coming (lol did you get the pun). Good job on your writing; the story is pretty interesting so far.

This was a good read! But I felt like the ending is lacking.. Btw, are you gonna have a sequel to this? Because I think it definitely needs one.. But aside from that, great story! :)

What an amazing story! I love any story that is pro gays, but this one is waaaay up there! I give five star rating on the story, but the grammar can use a little work :)

Please continue to write, the world could use more inspiration like this one.

i wonder how long this is going to last, the no sex thing that is.

Why doesn't this story have more reviews! It's freakin' awesome! I await your updates.

Its good.

wow, this blew my mind. please update asap.

I really enjoyed reading this. I read the entire thing in an hour and I like that you update fast. Keep it up!

I really enjoy this story. I read it all in like 2 days.

Some friends you got Lewis! You need to dump them ASAP and i hope craig get's better. It would be sad if her didnt.

why is it that when a chapter gets really good the story just stopped? update now!

I like the idea but I feel as if its being rushed though. I dont think both of them as a characters would have taken the relationship this quick. I just suggest you slow it down and make longer chapters :). I look forward to reading!