The story almost feels a little too fast paced for me so far, especially with so much action going on, and I had to slowly re-read through some parts of this chapter to make sure I could understand exactly what was happening. However it seems interesting so far and since I've really enjoyed some of your past fiction stories I am thinking of buying it off Amazon.

Just one thing that really disrupted the flow of the reading for me though; " My stomach sucked in with a tension-filled, electric jump as my eyes widened at the site before me." I think you need to use 'sight' here, not 'site'. (Unless you mean that she was looking at a building site or something ;) )

I really like your idea of revamping CPK. :) And no rush, I know that you are busy so i'm happy as long as you promise me that you will in fact finish that story. :) So just curious but are you going to be continuing your daily updates on T and T?
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl

I'm really glad that I could help! :) You shouldn't ever give up something you love just because of a bunch of critics. Me and everyone of your fans would agree when I say that you are an amazing writer. To be honest, your stories and new chapters make my day! :) Out of all of the emails that I recieved today, the one that you sent me and the one that said that youu had updated were my two favorites! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
P.S. Do you plan on updating Carla the Peace Keeper anytime soon? You kind of left me with a cliff hanger. :)

The adventure is definitely just starting. I am so intrigued by the globes, how Amanda will go about trying to get herself out of this situation, and most importantly how Sebastian will play a role in it. Elizabeth seems like such a fun loving character, and I desperately hope that its not a ploy. Sometimes the most trustworthy of characters should be the ones you have to be most suspicious of, and I hope she doesn't have anything evil up her sleeve. Hope that you'll update soon, can't wait to read more!

I really like this, and I want to follow it, but I think I'll probably forget all about it by the next time you update. You don't seem to update very fast. It's been, what, eight or nine months since this story was posted? And only three chapters? I'm not really a fan of the frequency that you update...

I suggest you put recaps at the top of each new chapter. :) It might help your readers a bit. I don't think anyone likes to scroll through previous chapters just to remember what's going on. I know I don't. I've learned from experience that doing that truly sucks. ;)

But, I'll follow it anyway. I love your style of writing very much and look forward to reading the rest of this story. Update quickly, please! ;)

-YouJustMight

I am super excited that you decided to continue with this story! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
P.S. The strangest thing happened yesterday. My mom stole my Kindle so that she could read one of her books but when she got bored she started reading your book that I had bought, Time's Atlas, and now she is obsessed with your books! :) It just cracks me up watching her become so ingrossed in your books! She absolutely loves them! Anyways, I explained to her that Details, Details, Details comes first but she had already finished Time's Atlas so she is now reading DDD. :) Just wanted to let you know that I unintentionslly created another Odette Bell fan. :)

I do like this better than the previous chapter two, I still haven't connected with Amanda [OMG, is it a coincidence that her last name is Stanhope? Because this doesn't feel like a tie-in to Gladys but still, I just realised that was her name and had a moment, lmao] but I'm liking Sebastian.

I'm hoping she'll grow on me though, there's just a bit of disconnect with her logic. I would've taken my chances with the car, running back inside just ... no. She didn't have to trust him but still, even if she ended up just running down the street at a later date, at least she would know where the bad guys were; back at her house, lol.

[Nope, he would have clicked it on again just so he could click it off slowly to give me a pointed message.]

Ass. lol. I already don't like him.

Great update! I liked it before, but I like it better now. :)

So...I read your bio. Does this mean you won't be continuing this story? Because that would be a damn shame. I love all of your stories, but this one reminded me of Gladys the Guard, which is my favorite (Zero coming in a close second). Something about the tempo and the action - I was seriously loving it and couldn't wait to see where you were going with the characters! Please don't say that you won't - unless you like kicking kittens in the rain, which is what my heart will feel like if you do (please excuse the double negative).

I can't wait to see where you take this! Your stories are so inventive and adventurous!

Oh gosh, this story has a hook in me! I started it a couple of days ago and have been checking back to see if you've updated it yet - please do! :)

you are AMAZING. i am LOVING this story. you somehow take cliches and make them both interesting and intruiging. can't wait to read more!

So good! Must have more ;)

And the plot thickens! I knew there was a bunch of bad guys from the opening chapter but I didn't think they would be such a diverse group, lol.

I'm glad that we get to see some of Sebastian's POV and that we get a clearer impression of who/what she's up against even if just through names and general descriptions [Dragon Syndicate, total mafia/yakuza type image there, lol]

I get the feeling that at some point in her life she was the 'black and white dress' kinda girl, willingly, it something happened and so now she's turned her back on it in the most obvious way she knows how.

Yay! :) You updated this story! I was worried that you had lost interest in this one. :) I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl