Reviews for The Deal with Dragons
Dracona1069 chapter 52 . 8/16/2012
I love this story. Great characters, plot, everything. Sad ending though. T_T. I liked Kevin! Favoriting this!
Guest chapter 52 . 7/7/2012
Oh God, I'm gonna cry! Kevin's death just totally ripped my heart out! He was a very lovable character.
I hope you consider actually publishing this, it is difficult to find nice fantasies with dragons.
Your 16 year old fan,
Greenie10 chapter 52 . 6/23/2012
Started reading this last night, finished by this afternoon. Great story, love Kevin, though Leah was cool and wacky. Like most of the other reviewers, I'm hoping for a sequel, especially since the last chapter hints towards afterlife and reincarnation. But yeah, just as their story is, it's great, bittersweet and Kevin we miss you too!
aprilyap86 chapter 2 . 6/21/2012
Hi Lauren,

I think that your story is interesting. I am very curious about Kevin and what the story would turn out. I like love stories about dragons and adventure. I hope to read more of this story! It's just the first day of school and things are getting exciting. This is for a change cause most romance with a none human being is mostly with vampires. I think this would be make readers thrilled with the dangers and advantages with having a dragon as your partner or friend.

Ray-Anne chapter 52 . 6/11/2012
Sad ending surely, but I've written my share of them. This was also a very nice story.
Nacht Graves chapter 52 . 4/20/2012
KEVINNNNNNNN! effing-tastic story btw and it ended really well. but KEVVVVVVIIIINNNNNN! i almost cried and i dont cry that easily... i love ur stories for the plot and writing both :P and one more final KEVVVIIIIIIINNNN! if u do a sequel where they are reincarnated and only one of them remembers (kev preferably) and then they get their ending i will freaking fan-girl scream :P u are awesome!
Some random lame name chapter 52 . 3/7/2012
You NEED to make a sequel to this in which Kevin has reincarnated and so has Leah and both are either humans or dragons. Like let's say Leah died in a horrific accident or something and then whabam they can be together. If you don't write I'm gonna imagine it and prevent myself from taking my computer screen and shoving it in my garbage can and disassembling the tower just for sick kicks and of course NOT keep track of what piece went where. Either way beautifully written story You are like my one of my favorite author's now.
Starry Bright Light chapter 52 . 3/6/2012
I loved this story. So sad that Kevin died :'( You're a very good writer, and I liked how you used the journal entries to tie it all together.

Good job!
Gothic.Nightmare.Forever.Royal chapter 52 . 2/11/2012
Oh my gosh. I can't believe he died. I will be honest with you: I was crying. I'm Not happy he died, but it did make a good ending. I hope there's a sequel to this. It was amazing. And for Kevin...I'm going to miss you too.
kiki19857 chapter 52 . 2/4/2012
It's sooo bittersweet! If Kevin was human, they would have got along better as a couple (romantic).
MavistheMad chapter 52 . 2/3/2012
this is sooo sad i cryed but it still is a good story
Elise Cromwell chapter 52 . 2/3/2012
So, so sad. :( I wish he didn't have to die, but it made the end more complete. I loved it. Thank you for this!
clara954 chapter 52 . 2/3/2012
I loved this story more with every chapter and am sad to see it end. I can't help but hope for a sequel where Leah gets a happy ending, but what you have is extremely well done. Keep writing!
Exsomnis chapter 52 . 2/3/2012
I'm really sorry to see this end, but it was a good ending. *sob* RIP, Kevin. :)
The Lovely Orange chapter 52 . 2/3/2012
AW! I still can't believe he's dead. :(
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