Reviews for The Deal with Dragons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Great characters, plot, everything. Sad ending though. T_T. I liked Kevin! Favoriting this! |
![]() ![]() Oh God, I'm gonna cry! Kevin's death just totally ripped my heart out! He was a very lovable character. I hope you consider actually publishing this, it is difficult to find nice fantasies with dragons. Your 16 year old fan, sopranokittythegreat |
![]() ![]() ![]() Started reading this last night, finished by this afternoon. Great story, love Kevin, though Leah was cool and wacky. Like most of the other reviewers, I'm hoping for a sequel, especially since the last chapter hints towards afterlife and reincarnation. But yeah, just as their story is, it's great, bittersweet and Kevin we miss you too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Lauren, I think that your story is interesting. I am very curious about Kevin and what the story would turn out. I like love stories about dragons and adventure. I hope to read more of this story! It's just the first day of school and things are getting exciting. This is for a change cause most romance with a none human being is mostly with vampires. I think this would be make readers thrilled with the dangers and advantages with having a dragon as your partner or friend. April |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad ending surely, but I've written my share of them. This was also a very nice story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() KEVINNNNNNNN! effing-tastic story btw and it ended really well. but KEVVVVVVIIIINNNNNN! i almost cried and i dont cry that easily... i love ur stories for the plot and writing both :P and one more final KEVVVIIIIIIINNNN! if u do a sequel where they are reincarnated and only one of them remembers (kev preferably) and then they get their ending i will freaking fan-girl scream :P u are awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You NEED to make a sequel to this in which Kevin has reincarnated and so has Leah and both are either humans or dragons. Like let's say Leah died in a horrific accident or something and then whabam they can be together. If you don't write I'm gonna imagine it and prevent myself from taking my computer screen and shoving it in my garbage can and disassembling the tower just for sick kicks and of course NOT keep track of what piece went where. Either way beautifully written story You are like my one of my favorite author's now. |
![]() ![]() I loved this story. So sad that Kevin died :'( You're a very good writer, and I liked how you used the journal entries to tie it all together. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh. I can't believe he died. I will be honest with you: I was crying. I'm Not happy he died, but it did make a good ending. I hope there's a sequel to this. It was amazing. And for Kevin...I'm going to miss you too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's sooo bittersweet! If Kevin was human, they would have got along better as a couple (romantic). |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is sooo sad i cryed but it still is a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, so sad. :( I wish he didn't have to die, but it made the end more complete. I loved it. Thank you for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story more with every chapter and am sad to see it end. I can't help but hope for a sequel where Leah gets a happy ending, but what you have is extremely well done. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really sorry to see this end, but it was a good ending. *sob* RIP, Kevin. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! I still can't believe he's dead. :( |