Reviews for Unforgivable
Guest chapter 12 . 3/21/2012
i like it keep writing
Dragons Forever chapter 12 . 3/17/2012
Shes so going to have to meet Dylan Monoski again I just know it...

Great chapter. :D
SPAMMER chapter 12 . 3/16/2012
Okay I love the direction your going with this story but please make the chapters longer PLEASE!
Phantom of the Fiction chapter 12 . 3/16/2012
...

Exams finished MONTHS ago.
Do Play With Fire chapter 12 . 3/16/2012
You asked how that was, and I will say that that chapter was good. Update soon please because we are all asking what happens next.
b.u.d.g.i.e LUV chapter 11 . 3/7/2012
Ah~ Such a wonderfully developed plot! Can't wait to read more!

...oh please write more the suspence is killing me...
Dragons Forever chapter 11 . 2/4/2012
Awesome chapter, I love how it ended "what did it all mean?'. Leaves a bit of a cliffhanger. XD
CookieMonster925 chapter 11 . 1/26/2012
Greetings, Nic-la!

I like this story a lot... really gruesome. Also, what is it with you and killing off the main character's mother in your stories? Could you be implying something... hehehe ;) I kid.

I think I get a sense of your writing style now; you don't use contractions and you say words like "shall." Pretty original, once I get used to it.

Update soon!

Peace out.

~Molly-wa
Do Play With Fire chapter 11 . 1/16/2012
Nice chapter, does Morana get is her awareness of Dylan a gift from her transformation?
Phantom of the Fiction chapter 11 . 1/15/2012
He's either a douche or someone too scared to be polite to a lady .

I still thing he's a douche.
Dragons Forever chapter 10 . 1/13/2012
DUN DUN DUUUUUUN! XD
Phantom of the Fiction chapter 10 . 1/12/2012
Paranoia! Those are the funnest pieces of fiction to read; the crazy ones! It'd be nice to see a few characters on the brink of insanity.
GreenMachine13 chapter 9 . 12/29/2011
I love this chapter! I love this story, and I love your writing! You keep writing, I'll keep reading and reviewing. :D
Dragons Forever chapter 9 . 12/28/2011
Once again, awesome chapter.
Phantom of the Fiction chapter 9 . 12/28/2011
One can't help but wonder why Sophia is going to that much trouble to take care of Morana. (see? I spelled her name right this time!) It's not everyday you'll meet someone like that...
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