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![]() ![]() i like it keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shes so going to have to meet Dylan Monoski again I just know it... Great chapter. :D |
![]() ![]() Okay I love the direction your going with this story but please make the chapters longer PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Exams finished MONTHS ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You asked how that was, and I will say that that chapter was good. Update soon please because we are all asking what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah~ Such a wonderfully developed plot! Can't wait to read more! ...oh please write more the suspence is killing me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter, I love how it ended "what did it all mean?'. Leaves a bit of a cliffhanger. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greetings, Nic-la! I like this story a lot... really gruesome. Also, what is it with you and killing off the main character's mother in your stories? Could you be implying something... hehehe ;) I kid. I think I get a sense of your writing style now; you don't use contractions and you say words like "shall." Pretty original, once I get used to it. Update soon! Peace out. ~Molly-wa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, does Morana get is her awareness of Dylan a gift from her transformation? |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's either a douche or someone too scared to be polite to a lady . I still thing he's a douche. |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUN DUN DUUUUUUN! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Paranoia! Those are the funnest pieces of fiction to read; the crazy ones! It'd be nice to see a few characters on the brink of insanity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter! I love this story, and I love your writing! You keep writing, I'll keep reading and reviewing. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, awesome chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One can't help but wonder why Sophia is going to that much trouble to take care of Morana. (see? I spelled her name right this time!) It's not everyday you'll meet someone like that... |