Reviews for Devour |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() ohhh... cliffie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG OMG OMG cliff hanger! Update soon pretty please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice idea. so will 'Emily' fall in love with Aiden again? hmmm... cant wait till u update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great idea to base a story off of, but I kinda got confused when Aiden only saw himself and somehow knew it was her. I love the concept though and I'm definitely going to keep reading! This should be published... I want it in my library! |
![]() ![]() this is a really cute story! Can't wait for updates! But can you try being a little more...detailed? Thanks, and GREAT STORY so far! |
![]() ![]() I like what you have so far! please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good story but you need more descriptions of your characters and their surroundings. Also in the second chapter when you said, "I entered his minds." I think you meant, "I entered his mind." People can't have multiple minds. That'd be cool but weird. |