Reviews for Devour
Dark Shadow Goddess chapter 6 . 12/31/2011
ohhh... cliffie!
Rainbow Raven Snapple chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
OMG OMG OMG cliff hanger! Update soon pretty please!
Dark Shadow Goddess chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
Nice idea. so will 'Emily' fall in love with Aiden again? hmmm... cant wait till u update!
Rainbow Raven Snapple chapter 4 . 12/30/2011
Great idea to base a story off of, but I kinda got confused when Aiden only saw himself and somehow knew it was her. I love the concept though and I'm definitely going to keep reading! This should be published... I want it in my library!
IDon'tGiveMyNameToStrangers chapter 4 . 12/22/2011
this is a really cute story! Can't wait for updates! But can you try being a little more...detailed? Thanks, and GREAT STORY so far!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
I like what you have so far! please update soon :)
Drawing Flower chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
It's a good story but you need more descriptions of your characters and their surroundings. Also in the second chapter when you said, "I entered his minds." I think you meant, "I entered his mind." People can't have multiple minds. That'd be cool but weird.