|Reviews for Class Choke|
| Ed Harley chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I'm suspicious of readers too- I think they're probably thinking about pie instead of concentrating. Still, it's never a bad idea to add laser guns to a story.
| RedX9 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Who doesn't love MCQs?
Usually when your classmates hand it up that early during a test it just means that they are prepared to flunk the paper. And when your mind is disturbed, you hallucinate.
Yep, there are instances where our mind just went blank and the questions look stupid.
Ohoho I guess the school cleaners didn't do their job
I didn't know gum chewing has such an annoying sound? That part reminds me of my recent story
Then could you review that recent story of mine. "Lonely Men Series" and true to its name, its pretty lonely with not much reviews.
| Hokuto Uchiha chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Hokuto Uchiha, reporting from Club Blitz :)
I really liked this; it made me laugh XD Although there are only a few minor things that need improvement. For example, in the fourth line, the one about brain farts being a common occurrence, it should actually be "brain farts are a common occurrence in this situation".
Great job, though; this really made my day :)