Reviews for Dense
Interesting chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
You write simply only to get your meaning across and you carry to the meaning to much, you love romance that i can tell probably written during the same time. You are a good writer with a few corrections needed, but you get your point out in your writing you just express it in a way that bores the reader. You focus to much on feelings you need to write as if its real and not fake, but always write as if you believe your own lie of the fantasy.